BearFoot FX site review

[Donner]

Hey would you guys do me a favor and go and work your way thru the www.BearFootfx.com site see if there is anything thats hinky - typos , bad links etc.... thx

[mmolteratx]

Some of the writing style seems a bit too casual, IMO. Some of the spacing seems off as well. Just as an example, this is what I would do for the HBOD page. Would also add in a bit more description for each pedal.

The Honey Bee sounds and reacts like small vintage combos with broken in tubes and speakers. Dynamic response is high, yet it has a very easy to play feel. With the innovative 'Nature' control in conjunction with the Drive control, you're able to drastically change the response both pre and post distortion.

The Volume control controls the overall volume without changing the distortion.

The Drive control varies the distortion complexity and saturation.

The middle control adjusts the 'nature' of the EQ. Begin with this control straight up (noon); to the right there is a subtle adjustment to the upper frequencies with the most treble content being located in the fully clockwise position. Turning this control counterclockwise from noon adds in lows and changes the saturation in conjunction with the Drive control. At full counterclockwise, the Honey Bee is fully bloated and saturated like a small combo pushed to its limits.

Operates between 5~15VDC.

- ALL HONEY BEES NOW SHIP WITH BARE METAL BOTTOM PLATE -

[Donner]

Some of the writing style seems a bit too casual, IMO. Some of the spacing seems off as well. Just as an example, this is what I would do for the HBOD page. Would also add in a bit more description for each pedal.

The Honey Bee sounds and reacts like small vintage combos with broken in tubes and speakers. Dynamic response is high, yet it has a very easy to play feel. With the innovative 'Nature' control in conjunction with the Drive control, you're able to drastically change the response both pre and post distortion.

The Volume control controls the overall volume without changing the distortion.

The Drive control varies the distortion complexity and saturation.

The middle control adjusts the 'nature' of the EQ. Begin with this control straight up (noon); to the right there is a subtle adjustment to the upper frequencies with the most treble content being located in the fully clockwise position. Turning this control counterclockwise from noon adds in lows and changes the saturation in conjunction with the Drive control. At full counterclockwise, the Honey Bee is fully bloated and saturated like a small combo pushed to its limits.

Operates between 5~15VDC.

- ALL HONEY BEES NOW SHIP WITH BARE METAL BOTTOM PLATE -

Thx mm --- yeah thats my midwestern understatement I try not to push much or oversell things ... Id rather the descriptions easily match what people will get when they plug in than try and trick them into something - I have a degree in marketing and wrote and produced commercials in a previous life, but I try and use my powers for good now

[mmolteratx]

Some of the writing style seems a bit too casual, IMO. Some of the spacing seems off as well. Just as an example, this is what I would do for the HBOD page. Would also add in a bit more description for each pedal.

The Honey Bee sounds and reacts like small vintage combos with broken in tubes and speakers. Dynamic response is high, yet it has a very easy to play feel. With the innovative 'Nature' control in conjunction with the Drive control, you're able to drastically change the response both pre and post distortion.

The Volume control controls the overall volume without changing the distortion.

The Drive control varies the distortion complexity and saturation.

The middle control adjusts the 'nature' of the EQ. Begin with this control straight up (noon); to the right there is a subtle adjustment to the upper frequencies with the most treble content being located in the fully clockwise position. Turning this control counterclockwise from noon adds in lows and changes the saturation in conjunction with the Drive control. At full counterclockwise, the Honey Bee is fully bloated and saturated like a small combo pushed to its limits.

Operates between 5~15VDC.

- ALL HONEY BEES NOW SHIP WITH BARE METAL BOTTOM PLATE -

Thx mm --- yeah thats my midwestern understatement I try not to push much or oversell things ... Id rather the descriptions easily match what people will get when they plug in than try and trick them into something - I have a degree in marketing and wrote and produced commercials in a previous life, but I try and use my powers for good now

I tend to do the same. Feels weird trying to describe something I'm selling in terms of sound and making it sound appealing without going overboard.

[Seiche]

I tend to do the same. Feels weird trying to describe something I'm selling in terms of sound and making it sound appealing without going overboard.

turn the nature control left: heaven (like indian summer)
turn the nature control right: heaven (but another kind, it's brighter, like mid day in late spring)
gain up: heaven (the one with the 77 virgins)
gain down: heaven (the one where everyone is dressed in white and clean and pretty but still awesome!)

[Donner]

I tend to do the same. Feels weird trying to describe something I'm selling in terms of sound and making it sound appealing without going overboard.

turn the nature control left: heaven (like indian summer)
turn the nature control right: heaven (but another kind, it's brighter, like mid day in late spring)
gain up: heaven (the one with the 77 virgins)
gain down: heaven (the one where everyone is dressed in white and clean and pretty but still awesome!)

heheh yeah I like it - clean heaven and dirty heaven ! ...... oh and the description was off a bit, turns out it was a 77 year old virgin